In a distant town, far away off from the dark and mysterious
forest, there lived a mother and her three gorgeous daughters. One bright
morning, the mother got ready to set off on her weekly run to the market at the
neighboring town across the forest. She asked her three daughters what they
wanted her to bring home and they all replied with a variety of foods,
clothing, and one even asked for a handsome man. But the third daughter didn’t
ask for anything exotic, only that she be brought back the brightest and most
vibrant red rose from her mother’s journey. Her mother promised to bring back
what each daughter had asked for and set off.
It took her a whole days’ worth of horseback riding to get
to the next town where she spent the night. The next morning she hopped out of
bed at the crack of light and began in search of all that her daughters asked
for. After all were in her possession, she set off in through the woods hoping
to return home before it became dark. Hours went by and the mother slowly
started to lose her sense of direction as the night became darker. Soon she
stumbled upon a castle as tall as the stars, but cold as the winter. It was as
if the weather had changed in the blink of an eye.
As she continued to explore what the castle had to offer
outside, she ran into a garden that had her recalling that her third daughter
asked for bright roses. Venturing through the garden she found the most vibrant
rose of them all and began to find her way back home. This is when the tenant
of the castle, a dark and terrifying basilisk, came to apprehend the mother. He
demanded that she bring her youngest daughter to the castle to be his prisoner
for stealing the roses from his garden. Frightened to her bones, she raced home
on horseback.
(Basilisk attacks Horse, Source: WikiMedia)
When she got home, her daughters came out in excitement to
see all that she had brought home with her. To their shock, she was in tears
and stuttering her words. Eventually she came around to telling the third and
youngest daughter that she had to go and be the basilisk’s prisoner as a
punishment for her roses. The daughter did not hesitate and set off at a moment’s
notice. When she arrived at the castle the basilisk appeared and told her that
he had been under a curse from the witch of the forest. This witch enchanted
him to look like this hideous beast and roam the earth for all eternity, but
the basilisk figured out that there was a way to break the curse. In order to
break the curse, the youngest daughter of a family must cut off the basilisk’s
head with a sword and then he came be free from this nightmare. This is why
when he saw the mother steal from his garden it was the perfect opportunity to
break free from his curse.
Little did he know that the youngest daughter, did not come
back to be his prisoner. Instead, she came back to exact revenge on the
basilisk for frightening her mother to her knees. She agreed to cut the off the
basilisk’s head, but at the exact moment she aimed for the body instead
striking him a great deal of pain. Straight to the heart was her intent and as
the basilisk laid there in agony, slowly dying, she looked down on him with
nothing but a smile. She had accomplished what she came to do and was now on
her way home, leaving the basilisk to die alone.
When she returned home, the mother and all the daughters
were so happy and relieved that the youngest daughter made it out alive. They
all asked what had happened to the basilisk, but was only told that she had
escaped from his grasp, not knowing that he was dead.
Author's Notes:
The original story "Beauty and the Basilisk" had a mother go out on a run to the next village in search for her three daughters request. The third daughter wanted three flowers, but didn't find them until she got lost in the woods and stumbled upon a castle. This is where she found the flowers and when she took them a basilisk appeared and ask for her daughter. When the daughter came to the castle, she was to nurse him for three hours a day and then eventually the basilisk demanded that she cut off his head. When she came around to cutting off his head, twice, a prince appeared and asked to marry her. The first half of the story was same because I liked how the story developed, but I did not like the ending. Most fairy tales and love story end up in favor off the "good" side, so I wanted to switch it up and have a "bad" ending that didn't result in what the audience expected. Instead of freeing the prince, she killed him instead.
Bibliography: "Fairy Tale: Beauty and the Basilisk" from European Fairy Tales by Josef Baudis. Web Source
Charles, this story is amazing. The build up, the setting, all of it gives you the visualization of what is going on. I am with you on not always having a happy ending. The fact that she killed him instead of being his prisoner was the icing on the cake. It was a happy ending, but not for the prince as most would assume. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi! I rewrote this story too but when I did it I let the "good" side win. I like your perspective on not having a happily ever after. The paragraph where she killed the basilisk was full of a lot of vivid imagery. I felt like I could see it taking place in my head as I read it. Good job!
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